英语 英语 日语 日语 韩语 韩语 法语 法语 德语 德语 西班牙语 西班牙语 意大利语 意大利语 阿拉伯语 阿拉伯语 葡萄牙语 葡萄牙语 越南语 越南语 俄语 俄语 芬兰语 芬兰语 泰语 泰语 泰语 丹麦语 泰语 对外汉语

英语四级作文热门话题:旅游

时间:2013-03-11 01:12来源:互联网 提供网友:laura6688   字体: [ ]
特别声明:本栏目内容均从网络收集或者网友提供,供仅参考试用,我们无法保证内容完整和正确。如果资料损害了您的权益,请与站长联系,我们将及时删除并致以歉意。
    (单词翻译:双击或拖选)

   Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:    1)有的人喜欢独自旅行,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行

  2)两种旅行方式的好处
  3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么?
  Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
  ___________________________________________________
  _______________________________________________________
  ____________________________________________________
  行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式,提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好:有人喜欢独自旅行,有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式,并说明理由。
  高分范文
  Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
  [1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.
  [4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring1 others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.
  [9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.
  亮点点评
  [1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。
  [2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。
  [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。
  [5]“倾向,趋于”。
  [6]“意外的惊喜”。
  [7]表示列举。
  [8]“和…相比”。
  [9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。
  [10]“或者…,或者”。
  佳句临摩
  1.佳句:When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions.
  临摩:当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时,人们的看法各不相同。
  ____________________________________________.
  2.佳句:Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages.
  临摩:和城市相比,乡村的经济相对落后。
  3>___________________________________________.
  3.佳句:Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.
  临摩:网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点,因此,我们应该将二者相结合。
  _____________________________________.
  KEY:
  1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday, different people will offer different opinions.
  2. Compared with the cities, the countryside is relatively2 backward in economy.
  3. Both network teaching3 and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine these two teaching ways.

点击收听单词发音收听单词发音  

1 humoring ff3d9bd427a66aa151d60c66b4e06ffa     
v.迎合,牵就,顺应( humor的现在分词 )
参考例句:
2 relatively bkqzS3     
adv.比较...地,相对地
参考例句:
  • The rabbit is a relatively recent introduction in Australia.兔子是相对较新引入澳大利亚的物种。
  • The operation was relatively painless.手术相对来说不痛。
3 teaching ngEziT     
n.教学,执教,任教,讲授;(复数)教诲
参考例句:
  • We all agree in adopting the new teaching method. 我们一致同意采取新的教学方法。
  • He created a new system of teaching foreign languages.他创造了一种新的外语教学体系。
本文本内容来源于互联网抓取和网友提交,仅供参考,部分栏目没有内容,如果您有更合适的内容,欢迎点击提交分享给大家。
------分隔线----------------------------
TAG标签:   四级作文
顶一下
(0)
0%
踩一下
(0)
0%
最新评论 查看所有评论
发表评论 查看所有评论
请自觉遵守互联网相关的政策法规,严禁发布色情、暴力、反动的言论。
评价:
表情:
验证码:
听力搜索
推荐频道
论坛新贴