2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女成长过程中的角色

 　　题目：

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture

　　below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and

　　comment on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 150

　　words but no more than 180 words.

　　2015年6月英语四级作文答案：父母在子女成长过程中的角色

　　“Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice.”

　　范文：

　　As is clearly depicted¹ in the above picture, a daughter tells his mother a piece of good news that she has been admitted to a university as her mother desires. There is no denial² in saying that the cartoon leaves us such a deep impression that we can not help thinking over a question: What role should parents play in their children’s growth?

　　From my point of view, during the process of a child’s growth, the role of parents is mainly listed as the following two aspects. On one hand, there is no doubt that parents are liable³ to take good care of their children. On the other hand, in children’s personal growth, parents ought to play a role as a person who helps children develop self-dependence, which carries more significant⁴ to children’s future life. In other words, parents should encourage their sons or daughters to be independent rather than reliant⁵ on others.

　　To conclude, in children’s personal growth, parents are responsible to care for their children. However, considering that they will grow up and live their own life in some day, parents should enable⁶ their children to acquire the ability to be self-independent.

　　译文：

　　如上所示，一个女儿告诉她妈妈有一个好消息：她已经考上妈妈为她选择的大学了。不可否认的是，这幅画给我们留下了非常深刻的印象，因此我们禁不住要思考这样一个问题，那就是，父母在子女成长过程中应该扮演什么角色呢？

　　个人认为，父母在子女成长过程中所扮演的角色主要有以下两方面。一方面，毫无疑问，父母有责任照顾好自己子女。另一方面，在子女的成长过程中，父母应扮演帮助子女养成自立的角色，因为自立对子女的未来成长是至关重要的。换句话说，父母应该鼓励自己的孩子自力更生而不是依赖他人。

　　总之，在子女的个人成长过程中，父母有责任照顾好子女。然而，考虑到总有一天子女会长大成人，自己生活，因此父母应该让子女养成自立更胜的能力。

1 depicted   

描绘，描画( depict的过去式和过去分词 )； 描述

参考例句：

• Other animals were depicted on the periphery of the group. 其他动物在群像的外围加以修饰。
• They depicted the thrilling situation to us in great detail. 他们向我们详细地描述了那激动人心的场面。

2 denial   

n.否认；拒绝，拒绝给予

参考例句：

• The newspaper printed a denial of the untrue story.报社刊登了否认不实消息的声明。
• Her denial of my advice hurts me.她拒绝我的忠告伤害了我。

3 liable   

adj.有...倾向的，有法律责任的

参考例句：

• We are all liable to make mistakes when we're tired.我们疲劳的时候都容易出错。
• He is liable for the fault of his son.他应该为他儿子的过失负责。

4 significant   

adj.相当数量的；意义重大的；意味深长的

参考例句：

• Your success today may be significant for your whole future.你今天的成功对你的整个未来可能是重要的。
• She cast him a significant smile.她向他投去意味深长的一笑。

5 reliant   

adj.依靠的，信赖自己的

参考例句：

• The hostel is heavily reliant upon charity.这家收容所在很大程度上依赖赞助。
• The service has become heavily reliant on government support.这项服务变得高度依赖政府扶持。

6 enable   

vt.使能够；使可以；使成为可能

参考例句：

• Only teamwork will enable us to get the job done on time.只有团结一致，我们才能按时完成这项工作。
• This will enable China to go a step further in grain production.这是中国粮食生产再上新台阶的巨大动力。