2015大学英语六级写作常见错误分析(2)

 　　用词错误

　　1) Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.

　　2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.

　　3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some complaints¹ about the service in the dining hall.

　　表达习惯错误

　　1) What generated² so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?

　　2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan.

　　3) In a room often live 6-8 students.

　　4) I think there are three reasons for this great change.

　　5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.

　　6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.

　　标点符号及大小写错误

　　1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings³ in our canteen are the best among all universities.

　　2) The man was racing⁴ down the street because he was late for the class.

　　3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.

　　4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.

　　5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.

1 complaints   

抱怨( complaint的名词复数 )； 诉苦； 投诉； 疾病

参考例句：

• a litany of complaints 喋喋不休的抱怨
• The company had received complaints both verbally and in writing. 这家公司收到了口头和书面的投诉。

2 generated   

a.生成的

参考例句：

• It is generated by some specified means. 这是由某些未加说明的方法产生的。
• It generated much excitement and frenetic activity. 这使人们非常激动并导致了狂热的行动。

3 surroundings   

n.周围的事物(或情况)，环境

参考例句：

• She is not very well tuned into her surroundings. 她不太适应周围的环境。
• The rich man lives in luxurious surroundings.这位富人生活在奢侈的环境中。

4 racing   

n.竞赛，赛马；adj.竞赛用的，赛马用的

参考例句：

• I was watching the racing on television last night.昨晚我在电视上看赛马。
• The two racing drivers fenced for a chance to gain the lead.两个赛车手伺机竞相领先。