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09年12月四级作文预测及范文(09)

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 09年12月四级作文预测及范文(09)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan1. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 
  1)现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光,他们被称作“月光族”
  2)有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念,但很多人反对这样消费
  3)我对此的看法是……
  The Moonlight Clan
行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述“月光族”现象,引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。
  高分范文
  The Moonlight Clan
  Nowadays, more and more people, [1]especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings2 every month without any savings3. [2]Many people think this is a fashionable life style, [2]while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
  [3]Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. [3]However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful4. In addition, no savings will [4]place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position [5]in case of unexpected expenses.
  [6]Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, [7]though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, [8]in the long term, it [9]is unfavorable to their family and career. [10]Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
  【亮点点评】
  [1]“尤其,特别”。
  [2]用于提出两种对立观点。
  [3]用于引出两种对立观点各自的理由。
  [4]“使…处于艰难的境地”。
  [5]“以防,万一”。
  [6]用于表明“我”的倾向。
  [7]though引导让步状语从句。
  [8]“从长远来看”。
  [9]“对…不利”。
  [10]引用谚语结尾,值得借鉴。

 


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1 clan Dq5zi     
n.氏族,部落,宗族,家族,宗派
参考例句:
  • She ranks as my junior in the clan.她的辈分比我小。
  • The Chinese Christians,therefore,practically excommunicate themselves from their own clan.所以,中国的基督徒简直是被逐出了自己的家族了。
2 earnings rrWxJ     
n.工资收人;利润,利益,所得
参考例句:
  • That old man lives on the earnings of his daughter.那个老人靠他女儿的收入维持生活。
  • Last year there was a 20% decrease in his earnings.去年他的收入减少了20%。
3 savings ZjbzGu     
n.存款,储蓄
参考例句:
  • I can't afford the vacation,for it would eat up my savings.我度不起假,那样会把我的积蓄用光的。
  • By this time he had used up all his savings.到这时,他的存款已全部用完。
4 wasteful ogdwu     
adj.(造成)浪费的,挥霍的
参考例句:
  • It is a shame to be so wasteful.这样浪费太可惜了。
  • Duties have been reassigned to avoid wasteful duplication of work.为避免重复劳动浪费资源,任务已经重新分派。
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