09年12月六级作文预测及范文（03）

09年12月六级作文预测及范文（03）(三)

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

　　2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

　　3. 你对网络依赖症的看法

　　● 审题概述●?

　　本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、
便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。

　　【范文】1：

　　l How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my
answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn¹ the world closer together, realized
countless² incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences
and a brilliant life。

　　Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments
publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition.
Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and
enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential
customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’
d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the
cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking³ and shopping。

　　True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive⁴ and its many negative effects are
already visible. For example, Internet addicts⁵ tend to withdraw to their own fantasy
world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online
pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all
this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and
never lose yourself。

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络
”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　resort to借助、诉诸、求助于

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)negative effects副作用、反面作用

　　(2)addicts成瘾者、依恋者

　　(3)fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界

　　(4)pornography色情表演、色情作品

　　(5)fraud欺骗、诈骗

　　【范文】2：

　　As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication,
the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the
mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before:
shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music
and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions。

　　For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some
people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it.
Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are
obsessed⁶ with it so much so that they forget many other important matters。

　　As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the
Internet is a gift of the technological⁷ revolution and a blessing⁸ of this information
age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean
the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those
Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper
use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you。”

祝大家取得好成绩!

1 drawn   

v.拖，拉，拔出；adj.憔悴的，紧张的

参考例句：

• All the characters in the story are drawn from life.故事中的所有人物都取材于生活。
• Her gaze was drawn irresistibly to the scene outside.她的目光禁不住被外面的风景所吸引。

2 countless   

adj.无数的，多得不计其数的

参考例句：

• In the war countless innocent people lost their lives.在这场战争中无数无辜的人丧失了性命。
• I've told you countless times.我已经告诉你无数遍了。

3 banking   

n.银行业，银行学，金融业

参考例句：

• John is launching his son on a career in banking.约翰打算让儿子在银行界谋一个新职位。
• He possesses an extensive knowledge of banking.他具有广博的银行业务知识。

4 pervasive   

adj.普遍的；遍布的，(到处)弥漫的；渗透性的

参考例句：

• It is the most pervasive compound on earth.它是地球上最普遍的化合物。
• The adverse health effects of car exhaust are pervasive and difficult to measure.汽车尾气对人类健康所构成的有害影响是普遍的，并且难以估算。

5 addicts   

有…瘾的人( addict的名词复数 )； 入迷的人

参考例句：

• a unit for rehabilitating drug addicts 帮助吸毒者恢复正常生活的机构
• There is counseling to help Internet addicts?even online. 有咨询机构帮助网络沉迷者。 来自超越目标英语 第3册

6 obsessed   

adj.心神不宁的,鬼迷心窍的,沉迷的

参考例句：

• He's obsessed by computers. 他迷上了电脑。
• The fear of death obsessed him throughout his old life. 他晚年一直受着死亡恐惧的困扰。

7 technological   

adj.技术的；工艺的

参考例句：

• A successful company must keep up with the pace of technological change.一家成功的公司必须得跟上技术变革的步伐。
• Today,the pace of life is increasing with technological advancements.当今， 随着科技进步，生活节奏不断增快。

8 blessing   

n.祈神赐福；祷告；祝福，祝愿

参考例句：

• The blessing was said in Hebrew.祷告用了希伯来语。
• A double blessing has descended upon the house.双喜临门。