托福写作最易得分的重点

 　　一、句式变化

　　1. 变换句子的开头结构

　　名词做主语

　　介词短语作状语

　　副词作状语

　　状语从句

　　分词短语作状语

　　形容词短语作状语

　　主语从句

　　不定式短语做主语或状语

　　动名词做主语

　　To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete¹ in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will not.

　　2. 使用不同的句型结构

　　Today’s education system places too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring² with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.

　　二、承上启下

　　1. 表示结论

　　in conclusion

　　in sum

　　to conclude

　　to sum up

　　2. 表示肯定程度

　　certainly

　　clearly

　　obviously

　　plainly

　　apparently

　　surely

　　undoubtedly

　　naturally

　　for certain

　　for sure

　　of course

　　never

　　always

　　possibly

　　perhaps

　　likely

　　probably

　　potentially

　　presumably

　　to some extend

　　in a large sense

　　generally speaking

　　in a sense

　　generally

　　in some sense

　　normally

　　ideally

1 obsolete   

adj.已废弃的，过时的

参考例句：

• These goods are obsolete and will not fetch much on the market.这些货品过时了，在市场上卖不了高价。
• They tried to hammer obsolete ideas into the young people's heads.他们竭力把陈旧思想灌输给青年。

2 conspiring   

密谋( conspire的现在分词 )； 搞阴谋； （事件等）巧合； 共同导致

参考例句：

• They were accused of conspiring against the king. 他们被指控阴谋反对国王。
• John Brown and his associates were tried for conspiring to overthrow the slave states. 约翰·布朗和他的合伙者们由于密谋推翻实行奴隶制度的美国各州而被审讯。