教你打造地道英文

 　　教你打造地道英文

         托福写作有时很容易：20分钟可以学会三种句型的运用。托福写作有时也很难，难点在于怎样用地道英文表达?在此大家平时需要多多练习，并通过不断地改进把你写作时可能常说的话由Chinglish改成地道的English。让我们现在走进地道英语世界，感受一下不一样的英文作文。

　　句子：

　　1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

　　改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

　　2. For example, you work in a big factory.

　　改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

　　3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

　　改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

　　4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

　　改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

　　5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

　　改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

　　6. Their brain is still very young.

　　改进: They are still immature¹.

　　7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

　　改进: Dissatisfaction impels² people for the better.

　　8. They can't analyze³ clearly what is right and what is wrong.

　　改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

　　9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing⁴ with time.

　　改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

　　10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

　　改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

　　以上是考生们在托福写作中经常出现的中国式英语经过修改后的地道英语的对比，希望大家能从中找出不同了解地道英语语法及词汇的使用习惯，掌握后可以更好地运用到你的托福写作中吧。把文章中的地道用法用到大家的作文中去，写出地道的托福作文，顺利高分。

1 immature   

adj.未成熟的，发育未全的，未充分发展的

参考例句：

• Tony seemed very shallow and immature.托尼看起来好像很肤浅，不夠成熟。
• The birds were in immature plumage.这些鸟儿羽翅未全。

2 impels   

v.推动、推进或敦促某人做某事( impel的第三人称单数 )

参考例句：

• The development of production impels us continuously to study technique. 生产的发展促使我们不断地钻研技术。 来自《现代汉英综合大词典》
• Instinct impels the cuckoo to migrate. 本能促使杜鹃迁徒。 来自辞典例句

3 analyze   

vt.分析，解析 (=analyse)

参考例句：

• We should analyze the cause and effect of this event.我们应该分析这场事变的因果。
• The teacher tried to analyze the cause of our failure.老师设法分析我们失败的原因。

4 dealing   

n.经商方法，待人态度

参考例句：

• This store has an excellent reputation for fair dealing.该商店因买卖公道而享有极高的声誉。
• His fair dealing earned our confidence.他的诚实的行为获得我们的信任。