英语写作辅导(在线收听

   
    英语写作辅导
    纵观我国各省市的中考作文题,目前来说还处于作文的初级阶段,也就是我们常说的描红和模拟阶段。这是由于我们英语词汇量有限,所接触的英语真正流通量太小,还不能自由发挥地用英语进行真正的写作。因此,中考书面表达题常以提示性作文为主,下面就具体说说这类作文的写法。
    1 .牢固扎实地掌握英语各项基础知识并灵活运用(大到句法、词法,小到大小写、标点符号的使用,遣词造句、连句成文等)。
    2 .观察理解试题要求的提示内容,独立思考,组织信息材料,安排短语结构,决定先后顺序,确定表达方法。
    3 .会使用英语中的连词,如 and , but , so ,等,使短文衔接自如,给文章润色,提高表达效果。
    4 .掌握并能熟练使用各种应用文的体例、常用语、格式等。
    写提示作文有技巧吗?有!
    1 .认真审题,明确要求。在提笔写作之前,花几分钟时间,弄清题目提示的内容、格式、时间、环境等,以免出现文不对题的现象,造成不必要的时间浪费。审题应包括:( 1 )仔细阅读写作要求和提示,在重点词下划线,以引起重视和注意;( 2 )用 a , b , c 等符号排列要点,把材料分成主次;( 3 )确定体裁、格式和人物;( 4 )确定表达的时间主线——时态及其相关搭配用法。
    2 .写作一定要切题,抓住要点。题目要求的内容应写进去,以保证内容的完整。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥,画蛇添足。
    3 .写作必须注意格式。比如英汉信件、日记、通知在格式上就有较大的不同。平常应多读、多记、多练相关文体课本、同步练习以达到实际运用的目的。
    4 .注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。在写不同题材和体裁时,所用的句式、时态、语言特征及用词均不同。写作时要多从交流的角度考虑以上各个方面。
    5 .写作时切忌用汉译英的方式进行。在写信时,考生不要把题目中的汉语指令直接译成英语,要尽量用简练的、地道的英语来写。
    6 .写作应连贯、流畅。尽量使用最熟悉的词句,少用复合句和长句,多用简单句、短句和主动句。
    7 .检查时应着重注意以下内容:( 1 )动词的时态和语态;( 2 )单词拼写;( 3 )冠词、介词用法;( 4 )语序;( 5 )名词的数与主谓一致;( 6 )句意与语法的一致性;( 7 )标点、格式、词数等。
    看个例题吧!
    ( 2002 年常州市)根据要点提示写一篇短文。要求:语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范,要点齐全。词数 60 - 80 (标点符号不计入总词数)。
    要点提示: 1 .上星期天上午我一直在图书馆看书。 2 .走出图书馆发现自行车不在了,只好步行回家。 3 .昨天去买车,款式很多难以挑选 4 .店主说,常州产的金狮自行车物美价廉,我买了一辆蓝色的。
    思路点拨:
    本篇书面表达比较简单,同学主要应注意以下几点:
    1 .因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情,所以全文一定要注意时态统一,用过去时态。有的同学在句中有表示过去时间的词语时,能注意运用正确时态,而其他情况下容易混淆。
    2 .一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序,所以在叙述时一定要注意事情发展的条理,注意前后语句的连贯性。
    3 .要注意词的运用,如 walk , home , Jinshi bikes , made , in Changzhou .
    参考范文Last Sunday morning I was in the library . When I got out of it , I found my bike wasn't there . I had to walk home . Yesterday I went to buy a new one . There were many kinds of bikes in the shop . I couldn't decide which to choose . Then the shopkeeper told me that Jinshi bikes made in Changzhou were nice and cheap . So I bought a blue one .
    怎么样,会了吗?做几个中考题练练吧!
    1 .( 2002 年福州市)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 - 70 左右。
    ( 1 )昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。( 2 )在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。( 3 )他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。( 4 )我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。( 5 )他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。
    提示词语: go out for a walk , on the road , the way to , walk along , on the left , thank for , be happy that .
    2 .( 2002 年黄冈市)小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者:他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中,小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明,并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴,他甜蜜地笑了……请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象,写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出(不计入总词数)。
    内容要求:
    ( 1 )帮助外国朋友;( 2 )与外国朋友交谈;( 3 )感谢小明;( 4 )小明很高兴。
    词汇参考: try ( do ) one's best , find ( that ), heavy ( lost ), carry ( show , take ), taxi ( car , bike ), on the way , talk with ( about )Xiao Ming had a dream (梦) last night . In the dream , he volunteered to serve (志愿列队) the Beijing Olympics .
    3 .( 2002 年重庆市)根据内容要求写一篇 50 - 80 词的短文。要求:书写格式正确,语句通畅、流畅,无语法错误。
    内容提要:今年四月 AAPP 要在重庆召开,外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。外国友人说:“重庆变化很大,街道清洁,灯火明亮,城市秀美,人更美,人们将记住重庆,重庆的明天会越来越好。”
    4 .( 2002 年安徽省)安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山( the Yellow Mountain )。
    ( 1 )位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。( 2 )乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。( 3 )登山便可领略其云海( the sea of clouds )、奇松( wondrous pines )、怪石( unique rocks )等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。
    注意 1 词数: 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。
    参考答案:
    1 . Yesterday evening , I went out for a walk with my mother . On the road , we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left , then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him .
    2 . Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream , he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried in the street , he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack , and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled , then he woke up .
    3 . In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing . The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people . The foreign friends said ,“ Chongqing has changed a lot . The streets are clean , the lights are bright , the city is beautiful , and the people are friendly . Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better . 4 . The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China . It lies in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there . It's not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While you are climbing the mountain , you can enjoy the sea of clouds , wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises , the sky looks very beautiful . It's really a nice place to visit .

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