09年12月四级作文预测及范文（03）（在线收听）

　09年12月四级作文预测及范文（03）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for

a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in

Chinese：
　　1)简单介绍个人情况　
　　2)说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额
　　3)保证会合理利用贷款并表明还款的决心
　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
本题属于情景式命题，要求写一封申请信。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：简单介绍自己的

情况，表明写信目的：申请助学贷款;说明申请助学贷款的原因、数额;保证合理利用贷款并表明还

款决心，最后表示感谢。
　　高分范文
　　A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan
　　Sep 12th, 2008
　　To whom it may concern,
　　I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing

in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for

the following four years.
　　My parents are both laid-off workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me

through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen

ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition

becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank

loan.
　　[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll

[7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay

back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am

looking forward to hearing from you soon.
　　Sincerely yours,
　　Song Xue
　　【亮点点评】
　　[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。
　　[2]“超出…的能力范围”。
　　[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。
　　[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
　　[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。
　　[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。
　　[7]“不遗余力”。