雅思大作文常见论点角度积累

备考写作的同学们都了解，在拿到雅思写作题目的时候，常常担心句型写作、语言不够精准。但往往忽略了文章的框架和主题内容。多数同学在备考雅思写作时常常是准备语言，读明白题目，却忘了观点。不注重分论点如何提炼，不注重语料如何积累。为了避免此类问题产生，将积累的经验写成打油诗，供同学们参考。

　　论文观点角度多;

　　科技经济常切磋;

　　肉体灵魂不放过;

　　权利平等要把握;

　　个人国家多权衡;

　　文化道德思路扩;

　　结合话题多思索;

　　主体论证不难说。

　　一、科技和经济

　　在雅思论文主体部分写作中，科技角度是使用频率最高的角度。绝大多数作文的话题都可以从科技发展对人的生活带来的影响这个角度来加以分析。例如：

　　讨论是否将动物用于科学实验：

　　Some scientists claim that experiments carried out on animals would be crucial for potential breakthroughs in treating some of the most-feared incurable¹ diseases.

　　讨论社会道德下滑：

　　Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism² and capitalism³ which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.

　　压力大的原因：

　　The rapid development of science and technology makes work today more demanding than it used to be.

　　亲情淡漠的原因：

　　The availability of a great variety of high-tech⁴ recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.

　　环保全球化的原因：

　　Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified⁵ scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone⁶ depletion⁷, the marine⁸ pollution and the like.

　　如果说科技的发展是人类社会进步的助推器，那么经济的影响就是社会前进的方向标。经济的强弱通常会导致某一现象的出现或某种结果的产生。比如在讨论什么是最伟大的发明时，考生可能想到电话。那么怎样来支持这一观点呢?试看下面的句子：

　　The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.

　　通过说明电话的发明使女性获得工作更多的工作机会，从而在经济是更加独力，这对于她们争取平等的权利起到了巨大的推动作用。

二、肉体和灵魂

　　雅思大作文常会出一些有关科技发明或娱乐方式的利与弊话题。那么不管是写好处还是坏处，考生应该从该发明或娱乐对人的肉体和灵魂这两方面去组织自己的分支观点。比如电脑对肉体的影响：

　　You don"t have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese⁹.

　　Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

　　发明或娱乐对肉体的影响主要表现在削弱势力和增加肥胖两个方面，而其对灵魂的影响则涉及一下多个方面。

　　1.高频率的信息切换影响孩子们的耐性。

　　There is not deny in that with the advent¹⁰ of technology, our patience grows thin.

　　2.媒体中的暴力节目扭曲孩子们的灵魂。

　　Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying¹¹ their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

　　3.对媒体过多关注使孩子们变的孤僻而脱离现实生活。

　　For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated¹² and indifferent than those kids in last century.

　　三、权利和平等

　　四方的文化在一定程度上可以浓缩为：权利、平等和自由。中国考生在人们该不该做什么事情或行为的时候应该多从这个方面去说服考官。

　　如果写到动物的保护问题时，可以说：Animals are not created for humans any more than women are created for men, black for white.

　　在写到政府是否该花钱来发展武器时，可以说：There is no doubt that the advancement¹³ of military technologies is one of the greatest dangers to all human rights, including the most basic right to life itself.

　　在写到环境的重要性时，可以说：

　　All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being¹⁴.

　　在写到小孩子是否应该对自己犯的罪负责时，可以说：

　　When someone turns 18, he or she should be tried as an adult because they have adult rights. Children, however, do not have the same rights as adults do. Then, if a five-year-old child killing¹⁵ someone has been sentenced the death penalty, the trial that determines whether or not someone should be tried as an adult are absurd.

　　在写到传统的西方道德中对私有财产的尊重时，可以说：

　　Respect for property is no less important than respect for person. Indeed, respect for property is one species of respect for person. Property is the stuff of personal independence. It is, therefore, an economic foundation of freedom. A society in which respect for property diminishes is one in which freedom diminishes.

　四、个人国家

　　有时候，一个现象或问题的出现是由于个人的努力和汗水或个人的疏忽，以及社会国家重视或政府的政策不恰当而导致的。例如：

　　运动员是否应该拿高薪：

　　Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically¹⁶ and psychologically more than the average people, which can justify¹⁷ their high salary.

　　青少年犯罪的原因：

　　Young people’s inexperience and gullibility¹⁸ easily lead then into traps. (个人的原因)

　　The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents can explain this social issue. (国家的原因)

　　在男女平等的意义上使用个人和国家的分析角度也是很有效的：

　　Every woman is worthy¹⁹ to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is our responsibility and right to pray, promote, and protect the human and divine rights of all. The world"s stability and prosperity depend on it.

　　The full and equal participation²⁰ of women in all spheres of life is essential to social and economic development, the abolition²¹ of war, and the ultimate establishment of a united world.

　　五、文化和道德

　　文化和道德本来就是雅四大作文中较难的两个话题，而近来这两个话题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个角度来准备一下主体段落的观点。

　　反对强势文化入侵：

　　Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational²² corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing²³ campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.

　　该不该撒谎：

　　The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse²⁴ impact on one’s personality.

　　总之，在大作文的主体段落写作过程中，考生可以将以上的思路结合题目的特点综合应用，切忌生搬硬套。平时在读文章时也要多总结别人的观点角度，而后为我所用。这样定能让你逐渐形成西方的思维习惯，在考试中能才思泉涌，下笔有神。

1 incurable   

adj.不能医治的，不能矫正的，无救的；n.不治的病人，无救的人

参考例句：

• All three babies were born with an incurable heart condition.三个婴儿都有不可治瘉的先天性心脏病。
• He has an incurable and widespread nepotism.他们有不可救药的，到处蔓延的裙带主义。

2 materialism   

n.［哲］唯物主义，唯物论；物质至上

参考例句：

• Idealism is opposite to materialism.唯心论和唯物论是对立的。
• Crass materialism causes people to forget spiritual values.极端唯物主义使人忘掉精神价值。

3 capitalism   

n.资本主义

参考例句：

• The essence of his argument is that capitalism cannot succeed.他的论点的核心是资本主义不能成功。
• Capitalism began to develop in Russia in the 19th century.十九世纪资本主义在俄国开始发展。

4 high-tech   

adj.高科技的

参考例句：

• The economy is in the upswing which makes high-tech services in more demand too.经济在蓬勃发展，这就使对高科技服务的需求量也在加大。
• The quest of a cure for disease with high-tech has never ceased. 人们希望运用高科技治疗疾病的追求从未停止过。

5 qualified   

adj.合格的，有资格的，胜任的，有限制的

参考例句：

• He is qualified as a complete man of letters.他有资格当真正的文学家。
• We must note that we still lack qualified specialists.我们必须看到我们还缺乏有资质的专家。

6 ozone   

n.臭氧，新鲜空气

参考例句：

• The ozone layer is a protective layer around the planet Earth.臭氧层是地球的保护层。
• The capacity of ozone can adjust according of requirement.臭氧的产量可根据需要或调节。

7 depletion   

n.耗尽，枯竭

参考例句：

• Increased consumption of water has led to rapid depletion of groundwater reserves.用水量的增加导致了地下水贮备迅速枯竭。
• Farmers should rotate crops every season to prevent depletion of the soil.农夫每季应该要轮耕，以免耗尽土壤。

8 marine   

adj.海的；海生的；航海的；海事的；n.水兵

参考例句：

• Marine creatures are those which live in the sea. 海洋生物是生存在海里的生物。
• When the war broke out,he volunteered for the Marine Corps.战争爆发时，他自愿参加了海军陆战队。

9 obese   

adj.过度肥胖的，肥大的

参考例句：

• The old man is really obese,it can't be healthy.那位老人确实过于肥胖了，不能算是健康。
• Being obese and lazy is dangerous to health.又胖又懒危害健康。

10 advent   

n.(重要事件等的)到来，来临

参考例句：

• Swallows come by groups at the advent of spring. 春天来临时燕子成群飞来。
• The advent of the Euro will redefine Europe.欧元的出现将重新定义欧洲。

11 intensifying   

v.（使）增强， （使）加剧( intensify的现在分词 )；增辉

参考例句：

• The allies are intensifying their air campaign. 联军部队正加大他们的空战强度。 来自辞典例句
• The rest of the European powers were in a state of intensifying congestion. 其余的欧洲强国则处于越来越拥挤的状态。 来自英汉非文学 - 历史

12 isolated   

adj.与世隔绝的

参考例句：

• His bad behaviour was just an isolated incident. 他的不良行为只是个别事件。
• Patients with the disease should be isolated. 这种病的患者应予以隔离。

13 advancement   

n.前进，促进，提升

参考例句：

• His new contribution to the advancement of physiology was well appreciated.他对生理学发展的新贡献获得高度赞赏。
• The aim of a university should be the advancement of learning.大学的目标应是促进学术。

14 well-being   

n.安康，安乐，幸福

参考例句：

• He always has the well-being of the masses at heart.他总是把群众的疾苦挂在心上。
• My concern for their well-being was misunderstood as interference.我关心他们的幸福，却被误解为多管闲事。

15 killing   

n.巨额利润；突然赚大钱，发大财

参考例句：

• Investors are set to make a killing from the sell-off.投资者准备清仓以便大赚一笔。
• Last week my brother made a killing on Wall Street.上个周我兄弟在华尔街赚了一大笔。

16 physically   

adj.物质上，体格上，身体上，按自然规律

参考例句：

• He was out of sorts physically,as well as disordered mentally.他浑身不舒服，心绪也很乱。
• Every time I think about it I feel physically sick.一想起那件事我就感到极恶心。

17 justify   

vt.证明…正当(或有理)，为…辩护

参考例句：

• He tried to justify his absence with lame excuses.他想用站不住脚的借口为自己的缺席辩解。
• Can you justify your rude behavior to me?你能向我证明你的粗野行为是有道理的吗？

18 gullibility   

n.易受骗，易上当，轻信

参考例句：

• Gullibility: Measure of speed of paper adhesive bonding and its strength. 胶粘性能：胶粘剂对纸品的粘合速度和强度的能力。 来自互联网
• Open-mindedness can often be treated as gullibility and therefore as a tool to manipulate people's beliefs. 思想开明容易像轻信一样被对待，因此会被用作一种操纵人们观念的工具。 来自互联网

19 worthy   

adj.(of)值得的，配得上的；有价值的

参考例句：

• I did not esteem him to be worthy of trust.我认为他不值得信赖。
• There occurred nothing that was worthy to be mentioned.没有值得一提的事发生。

20 participation   

n.参与，参加，分享

参考例句：

• Some of the magic tricks called for audience participation.有些魔术要求有观众的参与。
• The scheme aims to encourage increased participation in sporting activities.这个方案旨在鼓励大众更多地参与体育活动。

21 abolition   

n.废除，取消

参考例句：

• They declared for the abolition of slavery.他们声明赞成废除奴隶制度。
• The abolition of the monarchy was part of their price.废除君主制是他们的其中一部分条件。

22 multinational   

adj.多国的，多种国籍的；n.多国籍公司，跨国公司

参考例句：

• The firm was taken over by a multinational consulting firm.这家公司被一个跨国咨询公司收购。
• He analyzed the relationship between multinational corporations and under-developed countries.他分析了跨国公司和不发达国家之间的关系。

23 marketing   

n.行销，在市场的买卖，买东西

参考例句：

• They are developing marketing network.他们正在发展销售网络。
• He often goes marketing.他经常去市场做生意。

24 perverse   

adj.刚愎的；坚持错误的，行为反常的

参考例句：

• It would be perverse to stop this healthy trend.阻止这种健康发展的趋势是没有道理的。
• She gets a perverse satisfaction from making other people embarrassed.她有一种不正常的心态，以使别人难堪来取乐。