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2012年6月英语四级作文范文参考

时间:2013-03-11 01:54:45

(单词翻译:单击)

   四级写作这次还是出得没什么新意,还是结合生活的细节事情来命题,考“过度包装”。其实徐可风认为这也怪不了命题的兄弟,毕竟四六级的命题也就是那些套路了,用多了,自然就很难再创新了。“过度包装”这种现象可风倒是常常看到,例如朋友中秋送的月饼啊,那月饼盒包装得比无比奢华,比骨灰盒还奢华。

  命题还是按照“描述现象”“分析原因”“建议措施”这老掉牙的三板斧,尽管老套,那也是“斧斧”生辉。(突然看到韩国再次扣押我国渔船的新闻,先鄙视一下)考前的YY里已经把最有效的方式给了大家,就照写吧(佛祖会保佑信文都的孩子的!)。昨天微博(新浪,腾讯)再次针对具体写作的思路内容给出了建议,不负众望,也有部分内容命中。
  下面徐可风就结合考前给出的模式,加上考前徐可风的预测内容,按照四级阅卷要求,写一份符合四级阅卷要求的的考场参考文章,以供参考。
  ① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.
  ② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.
  ③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.
  ① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
  ② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.
  ③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.
  ④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational1 phenomenon.
  ① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.
  ② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.
  ③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision2 on excessive packaging.
  ④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.

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