雅思写作中需要慎用的句型

 　　雅思写作中需要慎用的句型

　　 不要总以有生命的名词和人称代词开头(受汉语表达习惯的影响, to use I, People and We, 开头);

　　 不要千篇一律的使用主动语态;

　　 不要总是用(如果)(因为)(当)等口语意味较重的句子，要注意使用书面语体的句子;

　　 不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用动词名词化来表达;

　　 不用总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句子表达肯定的意思;

　　 恰当的使用排比句和平行句

　　 Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.

　　We are making great efforts¹ to improve our English.

　　 If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior² to cars.

　　 If we only apply³ book knowledge, we will not get good results.

　　 The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.

　　 Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.

　　 Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement

1 efforts   

n.努力( effort的名词复数 )；气力；努力的结果；努力（或艰难尝试）的成果

参考例句：

• The company was very appreciative of my efforts. 公司对我的努力十分赞赏。
• His efforts to stem the tide of violent crime have been as effective as Canute's. 他遏制暴力犯罪增长的努力一直是螳臂当车。

2 superior   

n.上级，高手，上标；adj.上层的，上好的，出众的，高傲的

参考例句：

• This machine is superior in many respects to that.这台机器在很多方面比那台好。
• He acted in obedience to the orders of his superior.他是遵照他的上级指示行动的。

3 apply   

vt.应用，申请；涂；vt.使专心从事；vi.申请；有关联

参考例句：

• I want to apply for the job.我想申请这项工作。
• You may apply in person or by letter.你亲自或通信申请均可。